Hypercritical of Your Work
Looks fine to me. Are you sure you are not just getting hypercritical
of your work? I did that once with a print I wanted to submit to a
national professional photography exibit. Stayed up all night, used
up an entire 50 sheet box of 16 x 20 paper, but finally got the
perfect print. There were prints hanging from wires all over the
lab. The boss came in and asked what it was all about. I told him,
and said I'd finally gotten a good one. He asked me which one it was.
Never found it.
You could add some space to the lines themselves in your ext style
sheet. That would make the paragraph space less obvious.
But it really does look nice just as it is.